https://youtu.be/sYPz2m7nekg
2) I greatly appreciate the feedback I received last time especially so because I was able to take away from it multiple things that I needed to fix in order to better my presenting skills.
3) This time around with my elevator pitch I tried to make sure that I kept a steady tone and tried to keep my eyes from wandering too quickly.
Hi Ethan!
ReplyDeleteI felt that your elevator pitch was very well done! I feel that it's definitely harder than one might think to maintain a level tone and keep one's eyes from wandering as they record themselves. It's something I think might come from the disconnect of recording oneself, rather than pitching to a live audience. I felt that you came off as very confident within this take of your recording, and felt that it might be more refined were you to try out practicing your pitch in front of a live audience were you asked to record your pitch again. Otherwise, thanks so much for sharing!
Hey Ethan,
ReplyDeleteI saw a big improvement from your last elevator pitch and this second pitch seemed a lot more clear and relaxed from you. I believed you explained yourself much much clearly in this second pitch and I am happy that the comments were able to help you develop a better pitch.